What's Love ???

[LSB-SongNghi]

Are your palms sweaty, is your heart racing and is your voice caught within your chest???
---> It isn't love. It's like.

You can't keep your eyes or hands off them, am I right???
---> It isn't love. It's lust.

Are you proud, and eager to show them off???
---> It isn't love. It's luck.

Do you want them because you know they're where???
---> It isn't love. It's loneliness.

Are you there because it's that everone wants???
---> It isn't love. It's loyalty.

Are you there because they kissed you or held your hand???
---> It isn't love. It's low confidence.

Do you stay for their confessions of love, because you don't want to hurt them???
---> It isn't love. It's pity.

Do you belong to them because their sight makes your heart skip a beat???
---> It isn't love. It's infatuation.

Do you pardon their faults because you care about them???
---> It isn't love. It's friendship.

Do you tell them everyday: they are the only one you think of???
---> It isn't love. It's a lie.

Are you willing to give all of your favourite things for their sake???
---> It isn't love. It's charity.


But...


Does your heart ache and break when they're sad???
---> Then it's love.

Do you cry for their pain, even when they're strong???
---> Then it's love.

Do their eyes see your true heart and touch your soul so deeply it hurts???
---> Then it's love.

Do you stay because a blinding, incomprehensible mix of pain and relation pulls you close and holds you there???
---> Then it's love.

Do you accept their faults because they're a part of who they are???
---> Then it's love.

Are you attracted to others, but stay with them faithfully without regret???
---> Then it's love.

Would you allow them to leave you, not because they want to, but because they have to???
---> Then it's love.

Would you give them your heart, your life, your death???
---> Then it's love.

[Mắt Đêm]

Ah, I have just read it a few days ago, but it was a vietnamese version.

@ Khánh: well, you always think that these whole sentenses were written by Minh Nhật, don't you ?


MĐ: Somewhere along the way you may want your English writing to get better. So I'm here trying out to do some corrections on your work, hoping to be at good help.
+ Ah, I read that just few days ago, and it's in Vietnamese.
Take a moment to notice that your action came to a complete stop "few days ago". The verb "read" must be in the past tense.

[LSB-Dieu]

Love is just an illusion <--- I like this sentence, heheh...

@ MĐ: Oh, she is a little girl .... little girl .... you know ...

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Nguyên văn gởi bởi LSB-DieuThuyen

Love is just an illusion <--- I like this sentence, heheh...

But some illusions may make love too

Nguyên văn gởi bởi LSB-DieuThuyen

@ MĐ: Oh, she is a little girl .... little girl .... you know ...

Huh? she isn't a little girl anymore, she's going to be major soon!
Anyway, it's not the principal problem I told about someone who copied these sentenses into his blog, and then made "his readers" believe that he written it So I mean "his readers" included our ĐCT


The first part of your message is where things got a little fuzzy for me, because I didn't quite understand what you're trying to say. I'm not stating here that you are wrong, but I'd like to see your above writing in a better way.

Below are some of my suggestion:
+ That kind of illusion can be expected to occur and become love.
+ Illusion can help you to see love in another perspective.

Here comes the second part.
+ She's getting mature now.
+ It's not a major problem.
+ I told you about someone who copied and pasted these things into his blog. He then leads "his readers", including our ĐCT, to believe that he wrote them on his own.

[LSB-Dieu]

Love is blue <-- I've just read it in QCMV. Sad but true, love is so blue.
I know something about that boy. I think he didn't mean to make "his readers" misunderstand. Problem is that almost of them are girls little girls.
Oh, I think I'm too old to read such kind of those novels.


+ The problem is almost all of them are girls.
+ I'm too old to read such kind of article.
Just a quick note for you not to forget those little tiny articles (the, a, an).

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Nguyên văn gởi bởi LSB-DieuThuyen

Love is blue <-- I've just read it in QCMV. Sad but true, love is so blue.

Yah, I thought too, love is so blue ^^

Nguyên văn gởi bởi LSB-DieuThuyen

I know something about that boy. I think he didn't mean to make "his readers" misunderstand. Problem is that almost of them are girls little girls.

LOL, what truth!!

Nguyên văn gởi bởi LSB-DieuThuyen

Oh, I think I'm too old to read such kind of those novels.

Why did you think that my dear, you're still young ^^


You can make it either way:
+ I thought so, too.
Or
+ That's what I thought, too.

And
+ How true!
Or
+How true it is!

[Tiểu-Muội]

MD : Oh ! Yeah ! I think so .
Love is not blue .
Love is nothing=))

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@ST: don't edit my posts to write your comments please! reply with your own post(s) if you want.

Thanks bro

P.S.: thank you for your corrections too ^^ (you know, I really respect your knowledge)

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Finally, I wanted to delete my last post, but I couldn't do it anymore ^^
So, I just want to tell that you can edit my posts if you want ^^